Lost
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About the song: Its the first studio recorded OC of a psychedelic progressive rock band from pune called Pitch Black Symphony..the OC is called Lost.
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Lyrics:
verse-1
Im just a dream,
still in search for the end.
Im just the dark,
still in search for the light.
ch-
I have learnt to fly,
with memories all around me,
My broken wings cant hold me now,
Im falling, falling down again…..
verse-2
Im just a free bird,
lost my way back home.
I just cant fly,
its too dark….
repeat ch..
verse-3
Im just a story,
waits to be told..
Im just a shadow,
waits to be cast….
Awesome it is. A couple of niggles. The lyrics would probably sound better if u use darkness instead of dark in the third line. Two give the lead vocalist some sort of backup his voice sounds slightly weak and about to break… and even if it did not u get more warmth in the song if u have more voices.
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Man, its a lulliby that goes through you, like an addiction, you more than hear it, you feel it! I love it.
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wow!! this is like nothing i’ve ever heard before I LOVE it!!!
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What a retarded song.. total waste of time for me.. Kick the vocalist out coz he sucks royally.. Music is too simple and old skool something which does not work these days.. Be more creative..
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thank u every one 4 ur suggestions and feed back…its a great thrust 4 us 2 create better music 4 all of u….also,i would like 2 say that this is one of our most soulful number,but we do have a lot of heavy progressive rock numbers on ur way…cheers.
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u guys suck big time!!!
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Im not a rock listner but i enjoy music in general. and im sorry to say that this music which was created was not good. I dont know why other people liked it maybe coz they know the band members. But seriously this is not exactly how much is created guys. It sounds like you have tried to copy some other bands style of playin or creating music. WHERE HAVE YOUR BRAINS GONE!!!!
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vocals aint that good….and lyrics are too damn simple……music is simple but okay!!……..patches aint good buddy…..drums could have been a lot better probably he doesnt knows how to play or he is restricting himself……..good keybaords on the background……gives a psychedelic feel…..
or probably i dont have an ear for ur music……..sorry but i didnt like it…..
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It was nice . I listened to it few times. I really liked it. Btw. I like the vocalist too.
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you guys are good..and for all those critic comments,dont take it too much,they doesn’t know what’s music,how musics are created,and bout the lyrics i love…it.a lyric should be simple,expressive and understandable to all,and the way you guys have named the song “lost”. it really connect the lyrics…and i don’t find any parts in the song copied,that girl who wrote the comment must be some dumb or trying to be a good listner..and sumit’s comment bout the drums is negative..he must be looking for some double bass drummin and rolls in this song,wch if u put it will be off the track…hey m daniel..m a musician by professional,i like your guitarist..his solos are mind rockin..keep the good work..cheers.
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hey awesome song.it touches my heart,kinda relates with my life..lol
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Seen u guys play live and never liked u guys.But this song is good but could use a little tightening up in the lyrics,tempo and guitar soubds a bit off in the solos and all too.BUt the idea was good loved the chorus.Sounds sad and makes u feel it.Good luck.
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thanks 2 each 1 of u…..4 listen’n r song..n commenting..these r very precious 2 us……thanks 2 all 1ce again!!!!
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hey thanks for the comments,roshan we are thankful for pointing out our mistakes,we have recorded this song in just one take so there’s a bit mess up,next time we will try our best not to disappoint the listeners.
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hmmm….finally u found ur own stream.
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Hey, amazing work!!keep it up.Hope to see the day when your albums will be sold like cupcakes
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