Safire - I wanna Fly
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Artist: Safire
Song : I wanna Fly
About The Song: A beautiful OC by the ingenious young troup from the land of rock Kolkatta.
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Nice Track !
But can be much tighter in terms of the drummer holding the Tempo together. Also in some place the guitarist going off CLICK.
There are only 2 elements that make music. SUR and TAAL (CLICK) ! if any one of them is missing or is not perfect it arn’t called music.
The Sur is good for this track. Just work on the Taal (CLICK) part of it….
Way to go !
Cheers !
Chakradhari
Sound Engineer
B’lore - +919972522507.
Hi chakradhari
thanks for leaving a comment really appreciate it dat u took time to listen to our song
but the taal part
we rec on just a 5 k worth drumset and the mixin also wasnt good the tempo is all rt when we play live but sum how i dnt know wat happened in the record
which part of the song precisely can u point out where its off beat???den we can check it ovr
cheers
nice guitars,nice drums…but all seperately…co-ordination cud hav been much b8r…but i guess al dese issues wil b solved wid a lil amt of practise…otherwise a nice trak…
lukin forward to some more music frm u guys in recent future…til den best of luk…and keep up the hard work…
Good work. Nice. Wound you people mind concentrating on Mixing?
And the drummer needs to improve little timing. The way of learning things…for everyone…You will be doing great!..I love to listen to your music more.
Bravo!
hi gokul
thanks mate for leavin a comment ya we ll hav to concentrate on mixin actually we v come up with 7 8 ocs so will be rec dem sometime soon den well mix all the tracks properly and put it up ova here
cheers
yup,,,bapok laglo gaanta………toder dum ache,,,chalie ja,,,anek upore uthbi,,,maliker ashirbad roilo,,hobe hobe………..
Hi subhodip,
I expect it soon.
the way u guyz startd the song is nice…thrs a problem wit the tempo…both drums n the guitars…thrs a little problem wit the coordination of the drums n the bass…but i really liked the drum line…the guitar riff n the bass line were also nice except the bridge…cud hav been a bettr bridge…i liked the song in parts…cud hav been much tighter…practice hard, play tight n im sure u guyz will be doin great…
keep playin..
hi debo
thanks man we ll surely try to check things ovr again especally the tempo and stuff
but thanks for listenin really appreciate it
cheers[:)]
Hi
but neone with ne suggestion wid the guitar solo??did u guys like it
keep it up….tho d sound is kinda not tight…but i know u guys..i hrd u guys play so i know how well u can pull this off actually…and *bows down to subhodip*..way to go…rock on \m/
Hey I dont know man, sounds perfect to me..!
same here @Ujj me too.
hi guys
thanks everyone for leavin a comment
as for the problems will take all your suggestions in mind and try to mend them
cheers
Hey guys I don’t know anything technical about music. But I liked the guitar solo at the beginning. The opening was all well and good but the middle part had a bit a tempo problem i guess, the guitar and drums didn’t seem to play together or something and there was this clingy sound from the drums. And the vocalist(Krishna) didn’t have the voice to override the music in some places. For me the vocals weren’t just good enough.
shila
thanks man will solve the prob bout the tempo as for the vocals he ll sound more good with experience
cheers
hey guys ur vocalist need to make his voice more heavy… well hate to break it to u the co-ordination was not so gud…drums timings was a bit off d track..but the guitar solo was gud…
Good job overall. I completely agree with Shiladitya - the guitar was pretty good, but the vocalist - in spite of being a very good singer - lacks the depth needed for this particular song. A deeper and bass-oriented voice will suit the song more. Ensemble guitar solo was pretty good, but you guys need to gel together more. Everyone keeps saying the drums were at fault, but frankly, I don’t think it was the drummer’s fault alone. If you just listen to the drums, they are fine. Same with the guitar. It’s just a gelling problem. I don’t think the lyrics are bad though. And once more, the guitar solo was very nice.
hey rik
thanks man for the solo part
the gellin part we ll try to take ur criticisms and improve thanks man ne wyas for listenin to the song
cheers
Dis one’s actually one of my favs…!!
All you people on dis thread,i can tell u …..these guys can really…..KICK ASS..!!!
Brilliant job done …the harmonized melody lines were jus’ too awesum to dig at one go ….so i had ter spend a lot of time on the song actually…!!
The seemingly dissatisfying aspects are simply a descendant of poor mixin’……mixin’ is the most important part of any studio project…..But,all of you shud hear dese guys do their thing live…!!!
They are jus’ too freakin’ gud…!!
Rock On,Guys..!!
\m/
Guddu
thanks man for the support
ya i guess the mixin s causin the major prob wat vr there is cause people are nt actually gettin to hear the kick drums and stuff proinently dats why its soundin offf beat
Tel marchi na ..putting it up straight
You all are individually good but since i know you guys and what you are capable of..i must say you can do really well over this…
guitar er perspective theke dekhechis onek somoy .. atleast amar mone holo … composition er perspective theke dekh .. imagine what the hell instuments come to your mind.. then improvise as a setup.. you guys are doin good usual… originals e work out kor….
I think Krishna doesn’t have the bass or passion in his voice to be a rock singer, specially with the genre you guys are practising. He is more suited to pop.
Shila
no one s a born rock singer u know and theres nothn dat hard classified as rock pop or watevr if u are a good singer and work towards ne style of music being rock metal funk nethn u can develop it wid prac ur not born wid it u get to learn and krsna is an awesum vocalist and hes workin towards dat so no chap
Kichhui bujhi na…liked it. As pointed out by some, tightness-ta ektu off lagchhe botey, but all in all a real good track! Keep up the good work.
well…its definitely good..but i believe u guys can do even better…as a total thing the track is real good…but as many have pointed out before…tempo’s a bit off….still a good track overall guys…keep up the good work..\m/
first of all….nice work on the bass by tatai ,i must say….but the tempo is a bit off, as many pointed out….but its not tuhin’s fault….he sounded very solid….but although the individual guitaring was good….i expect more from both subhodeep and harsh….krishna doesnt sound that good…but i am sure its because of the mixing….but as i said my exectations of u guys are a lot higher….overall….nice work!!
abt krishna’s voice….
dude you have to use the microphone differently… its really important that you learn to use it to you r advantage as required for your voice..there are techniques which helps to enhance the bass even while live.So get hold of them .. your got your tune right boy bt theres a feel that carries the singer far..
Guys,
I have an idea for our drummer. He seem to miss timing when he wants to give a pass. He does not ride the pass fully and gives a beat which is prematured.
I suggest to watch videos of drummer(especially Jazz) and other instrument players to know what their body language says when they perform.
One can practice/perform with an adopted body language (I dont mean a deliberate one). Watch videos, some instrument players become dancers! Mean…they sense the timing!
Cheers
great track guys!!..
superb guitaring, drumming too..but the track lacks tightness a bit…m sure this prob can b made out wit lill more practice…a prsnly felt vox need to improve a bit..otherwise a very nice composition..nd truely an ear friendly sound ya guys r producing..thats a tough job a bliv….thats all…
keep rocking guys..got great future ahead..\m/.
Guys,
I listed again…
1. Great singing
You have to grab the mic closer..or some sound engineering control needed fried. Never allows the accompanying instruments over play your voice. Really important. I use to grab mic very, very close to and have the habit of adjusting it when it turn my face here and there. With such an effort your voice would sound great.
2. Drummer is skilled
He performs good when it comes for faster beats. He has to cultivate the ability to control his hands when he has to..with this effort he would be doing great.
3. Solo Guitar fantastic!!! Good control
4. Again..in general, concentrate on mixing..and whenever there is shift, you guys miss some co-ordination. play your song again and again to understand what I try to point out. That is the only thing many people comment in different ways. The trouble is only one.
I just close my eyes and imagine your song with little corrections above said and with good MIXING…it sounds GREAT in my mind.
Keep pushing yourselftowards what you need to get.
You guys are going to Rock for sure!
Hey gokul
thanks for listenin to the song so vividly and telling us where u think we went wrong we really appreciate it the next time we do some rec will surely keep all these in mind and do a bettr one for sure
neway i think iv got nothr oc comin up ovr here within next week so watch out for it
cheers
Liked the guitarist very much…
but i would suggest u guys to give keyboard fill ins to the song. it makes a song sound so much better…
sumwhr down i felt the drummer needs to improve.
All in all a good effort from Safire.
My bst wishes are with u guys. Keep Rockin!
nice…. wnt go for technical suggestions….
wat u guys r doing sounds perfectly good but it was better to hear u guys live…. best of luck wid ur endeavours n keep up da good work….
regards,
RATUL (drummer of RUDRAA)
good work guys!!!!
Keep it UP
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Hey guys,
the song is an appreciable effort from safire, but it lacks a few things. The vocalist has to improve, in order to keep up with the guitars, it needs to be a bit more bass-oriented, there are some problems with the drums, it is clear there were some limitations regrding the quality of drums you people had. Recording isn’t good enough. I think the tempo wasn’t correct. Guitars are beyond any doubt good, apart from some occasions. Anyways, it’s way too cool a song for a new band, like u guys, surely u would be able to come up with far better music in coming years. best of luck, safire.
Nice composition, need lottsa fine tuning. The drummer needs to be more flexible. There are lotsa gaps in his/her drumming. In the song progression the drum is pretty hollow. Sounds like he was feeling sleepy or you just hired a temporary drummer!
liked it a lot.knowin lil abt music wont b able 2 comment on it..bt as a listener i enjoyed it thoroughly.the band has what it takes to make it big.good luck!!!!