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My Jane

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About the Song: Another character descriptive song. The words from the guy being looked upon. He’s lost in his affairs and his off-cast life. He rises in his thoughts beyond the level he ever imagined and finds the cruelty in the air. He thinks higher cutting it deep inside. All the time, it boils down to her, the one who made him up. Her smell he still remembers and her silence he still talks to. He may die or may be not. He finds a means to kill the a man, so ignorant, he hurt her all the time. He wants to go back. — Guts


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Lyrics:
On a paper, a scratch he makes
ignoring the world they embrace
his eyes see more
and even more than the race
his cocky thoughts
keep him away

The perception thru his thots
raise up another stack
the world in layers
flows out from the deck
burring a man
to his decided fate

Under her shade
once he felt alive
now he kills himself
but never will he die

someday …he wont
but alone he cant hide
the past he saved

keeps the killer alive

he tries to walk but he flies
to the oceans through the deepest sea he dived
He tries to reach out … the Bird
…. too high!

— Gautam Tripathi
December, 2007





One Comment on “My Jane”

  1. Amazing!
    I felt a deep resemblance with Mary Jane. True??

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