• Pilgrim By Tarun 12:38 pm on November 18, 2008 | reviews
  
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  My lone cryptic pun
  Watch me as i speed away on your night window
  Lights from gloom
  Lights from hidden blue doom
  Firefly Fuelfly
  Melancholy skin sky
  Ceaseless grind - This way ‘n that
  Round ‘n round
  Rubber worms on highways
  Duets in black haemorrhage
  Songs of solitude
  ‘Midst caravan orgies

   

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• Sumit 3:26 am on November 21, 2008 | #

  Hi Tarun,
  I tried to understand Pilgrim. But i am not able to. Please throw some light on your thoughts behind it.

• Tarun 9:08 pm on November 24, 2008 | #

  Stuck in rush hour traffic, returning from work, starin’ at your reflection in the window - sparked this piece of work. An unwilling pilgrim that one is forced to become everyday(with some metaphorical imagery thrown in for the lights,wheels,roads,vehicles and the noisy cacophony that surrounds you).

• philomel 12:40 am on November 28, 2008 | #

  i love the way you have made used of images…..

• Pretty Prats 3:52 am on December 1, 2008 | #

  nice one

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