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  • Mohabbat By Mohammed.Ismail 5:51 am on August 11, 2010 | reviews
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    Mohabbaton mein jeenewale khushnasib hain
    mohabbaton mein marne wale bhi ajib hain
    ajib hain hamari daastan jaan-e-mann…faaslo par rehte hain

    Stanza 1

    Mehbub ki basthi se hum..
    qutub shahi se nahin
    mohabbat ka mahel na sahi par apna tajmahal zarur thairayenge hum

    Stanza 2

    Tumse kitni mohabbat hai ye bata nahin sakte
    yakeen nahi hota ki tum chahte nahin hum
    tumhare siva hum kisi ko chah nahin sakte!!
    tum hi ho meri zindagi
    jo tum sath nahin toh yeh jannath bhi jee nahin sakte

    last dailouge:-
    ‘Jab hamne apka naam apne hathgon ki lakheeron mein
    tallash kar ke thak gaye!
    toh humne muskura ke kaha
    “Lakeere jhut bolthi hain”

     

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  • salil 1:11 am on August 12, 2010 | #

    hey gr8 thought
    bt i wld love if u try using a bit softer words and let them rhyme in a rhythem…and the lines should gradualy explain everything…bt its very good

  • Mohammed.Ismail 12:28 am on August 16, 2010 | #

    Thanks for reading it and giving suggestion.i will try to write by using softer words bhai.

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