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  • Juda Mein Hua By Waqas Ahmed 12:07 pm on November 12, 2008 | reviews
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    About the Poem:
    Ik Khoubsurat seee kali hai wo,
    najanayy kis bhag mein,
    anjanay say ja mili hai wo
    phool hai wo, khusboo hai wo,
    meray sapnoo ki hooor hai wo…..

    Juda Mein Hua
    teray sath say
    ba-khuda mein roya
    teri yaad mein
    bay dard saa ban gaya huane mein
    anjan raston pay chal diya hune mein
    meri sanson mein ab wo mehak nahi
    meray suroon mien ab wo laay nahi
    juda mein hua
    teray sath say
    ba-khuda mein roya
    teri yaad mein
    badlon ki oorh mein dakta hune
    saharon ki dunia dhunta hune
    jala kar diya mein sahil per
    lehron ki chanak sunta hune
    juda mein hua
    teray sath say
    ba-khuda mein roya
    teri yaad mein
    reh kar juda ab teray sath say
    mein nafrat ki intehaa chahata hune
    judaa mein ho kar dunia say
    na janay kyun umeed chahta hune…
    Juda mein hua
    teray sath say
    ba-khuda mein roya
    teri yaad mein…..

     

Reviews

  • Rahul 12:48 pm on November 12, 2008 | #

    cool poem dude … this is real good stuff!

  • Waqas 3:15 am on November 13, 2008 | #

    Thanks alot!!!

  • Waqas 12:36 am on November 15, 2008 | #

    Frndz,
    It is my humble request, when ever you read any peom..must comment on it becoz it gives inspiration and guide line to new peoples.

  • Waqas 5:54 am on November 16, 2008 | #

    Hi,
    Guyz where r u?

  • harron 1:34 am on November 26, 2008 | #

    ?

  • Rakesh 9:58 pm on April 1, 2009 | #

    Really good….waiting for your next poem

  • chetan 5:04 am on May 21, 2009 | #

    hello waqas good job done.a very touching lyrics.i”ll use this for my new song …………….keep it up…please be in touch with me

  • waqas 11:59 pm on July 8, 2009 | #

    Hi Chetan,
    Do you use my lyrics or yet not?

    you can send me email on my given email address below

    thegr8waqas@hotmail.com

  • waqas 12:08 am on July 9, 2009 | #

    Its new stuff for you guyz..

    Ajnabi teri muskhrahat nay

    it is now uploaded on Tempostand. Thanks

  • thegr8waqas 12:22 am on July 9, 2009 | #

    Thanks all of you who appreciate my effort.

  • chetan 6:35 am on July 21, 2009 | #

    helo waqas ur having an ausum talent.i loved ur lyrics,and hope that u will have no objection if i will use these lyrics for my song……all the best,u are having a bright future……

  • thegr8waqas 10:57 pm on July 26, 2009 | #

    Hi Chetan. I have no objection.. But i just want that u can make it with your heart and seems like Marvelous…

    Because i hav wrote my all lyrics wid my full dedication and i also want in return excellent workout on them. :)

  • thegr8waqas 10:58 pm on July 26, 2009 | #

    hope i hear good news from u soon!!!

  • Atiya K 4:26 pm on October 6, 2009 | #

    heyy …. i dont know how u have advertised this link…buti saw it today.. the slow but really busy persn i am.. just wanted to say: the poem was great…. i lykd it.. (altho it took tym for me to read n understnd it…)

    tc

  • wAQAS 1:18 am on October 27, 2009 | #

    ya it is..dont worry…u can take ur tym..but when u can understand it ..u must be my fan [:P] LOLz

  • salil shivan 12:03 am on July 16, 2010 | #

    bahi bohoth uumda

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