• Heavenly Bliss By Dr.Hemant Vinze 10:15 am on February 20, 2009 | reviews
  Tags: Romantiques
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  The moonlit night
  bathes the earth with light
  The twinkling stars
  Sprinkle heavenly flowers.

  The still, silvery water
  of the silent mere
  With a garden of flowers
  and myrtle bowers.

  The breeze whistles
  the firefly glitters
  Enticing the youth
  to revel in Nature’s Truth.

  Aimless, themeless whisper
  Engrossed in youth’s rapture
  With insatiable hug and kiss
  O! O!! O!!! The Heavenly bliss!

   

Reviews

• Nivedita 9:20 am on February 22, 2009 | #

  indeed heavenly !!

• Dr. Hemant Vinze 9:26 pm on February 22, 2009 | #

  Hi Nivedita
  Thanks for your shortest and precise precis of “Heavenly Bliss”
  I visited your page but could not get hang of it
  I could not read your page hence could not appreciate.
  Kindly do the needful
  Hemant Vinze

• Nivedita 8:21 pm on February 23, 2009 | #

  maybe you shoudl click on this link : http://www.tempostand.com/poets/cheers-to-love

• s jaywant 3:11 am on February 27, 2009 | #

  great job, doctor, you weild the pen like you weild(ed) the knife. congrats.

• Dr. Hemant Vinze 8:07 pm on March 3, 2009 | #

  S.Jaywant

  Thank for your appreciation.
  I have been sending you power point presentation of my poems. kindly send your suggestions so that I can improvize my presentations
  Hemant Vinze

• Suchaita 11:09 pm on May 18, 2009 | #

  i liked it-the imagery, the feel, but i cud not totally grasp what it was all about. i guess the last line was the most interesting but the rest of the poem seemed quite conventional. maybe u cud b a little more experimentative. wud love to know if i have missed something though. and i wud love for u to read and comment on my poems!

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