• Death By Pradeep Pathak 3:49 am on November 14, 2008 | reviews
  Tags: Death
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  Bhoola tha main….
  aaj yaad aa gaya..
  sach jo subse alag tha…
  subko rula gaya..

  ekhlauti saans bachi thi…
  ek marm aah jagi thi…
  neend ka aankri jhokha…
  aankhir sula gaya…

  aub dard nahi…
  na karj hai koi…
  aub shabd nahi…
  na marj hai koi..

  aub ek soch hai…
  naye naqaab ki…
  nai subah ki…
  aur naye aadab ki…

  thithur na jaaun…
  kafan oodha do mujhko…
  kapkapi tez na ho…
  zara leta do mujhko…

  aub nai aahat hai…
  naya bharosa hai…
  aaj sub masoom hain..
  hisaab anokha hai…

  chalo alwida aub..
  ek raat aur kum hui…
  duniya ki baraat mai…
  shaam ki vidaai num hui…

   

Reviews

• pradeep 6:18 am on November 14, 2008 | #

  Frenz I need your Comments on it….!!

• Alok 6:20 am on November 14, 2008 | #

  wonderful poem pradeep ji….keep it up…!!!

• pradeep 6:21 am on November 14, 2008 | #

  Thanks a lot alok ji….!!!…I just asked for comments….!!!

• Deeepak Drolia 6:51 am on November 25, 2008 | #

  well done Prdeepji, very touching

• Rahul 10:00 am on November 26, 2008 | #

  Nice work Pradeepji,
  and even I am from Uttarakhand

• Pradeep 8:22 am on January 11, 2009 | #

  Thanks Rahul and Deepak Bro….[:)]

• chetan 4:14 am on July 14, 2009 | #

  wow wat words very nice i will you this for my song……….chetan

• pradeep 4:12 am on July 23, 2009 | #

  Thanks chetan..!!

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