Tum Samay Ki Reit Par
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Artist: Peiyush Sharma
Genre : Hindi/New-Age
About the Song: Lets look up guys, as we march together musically into another year. Lets take all the right steps from now. Here is a composition expressing a way of making words transform in actions.
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Lyrics:
Likhte chalo no jawan,
Nitnayi kahaaniyaan
Tum mita do dhhokaroon se
Zulm ki nishaaniyaan
Kal ki tum mashaal ho
Sabse be misaal ho
Tinke tinke ko bana do
Zinndgee ka aashiyaan….
Tum samay ki reit par
Chhodte chlo nihaan
Dekhti hai tumhe zameen
Dekhta hai aasmaan
Tum jidhar chalo udhar hi
Rasta bane nayaa
Ek uddhaye bojh sab ka
Waqt vo chala gaya
Sab kamayein saath saath
Kaam karein sabke haath
Jobhi aage badh raha hai
Dekhta usse jahaan…..
Tum samay ki reit par
Chhodte chalo nihaan
Dekhti hai tumhe zameen
Dekhta hai aasmaan
Heiayi ye…
hummmmmm………nice one
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dear friend i think lyrics i heard b4 but the way u made it, is really appreciable, specially the chorus part and the ending.
your voice is really very good, a combination of soft and strong,
i think this this will be really hit high.
best of luck
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You started well. The lyrics were not clear due to the layered music and they are not pronounced clearly. Maybe I do not understand the trend these days but this is my comment as a layman.
Good luck with your effort.
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Thank u Rachna, Puja n’ Sanjeev for ur valuable comments
regards
Peiyush Sharma
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itz a nice feel u’ve given to the stanza “tum samay ki raith par ” sounds nice .cheers !
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hey !!!!!
thanx chintan
regards
Peiyush
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very well composed, sounding absolutely good with the lyrics, it is full of josh.
keep it up boss!!!!
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The song is good. But the vocals sound a little off and seem to be unclear. Also, have you used Fruity Loops drums in your song? The hi-hats sound just like it. All in all, good work.
Light.
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thanx sahil
will re record soon.
regards
Peiyush
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hey sir!!!! wta roking song!!!!! i like this song thats so ommmmhhhh kind……
keep rocking sir
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thanx raag,
love
Peiyush
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nice 1 dude, itz my kinnda song, rilli lovd it
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Gr8 song.. I liked the music.. keep it up..
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thanx shailja
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thank u madhur
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good one Peiyush,
you doing excellent work, the feel which u gave to this song is appreciable cuz it was required in this, well arranged and played, singing was also good but i think u can do even better, but i am happy that you are looking more focused this time.
keep it up dude
with blessings
Neeraj
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sir!!!! wow!!!!
m in love with this song
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i like your song, i already know this song but people made it but they were very common type compositions can say very regular kind ways but the way you made it is really energetic and soulful, which makes it different.
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thnax a ton Neeraj
regards
Peiyush
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hey!!!! Raj…..i can’t believe it….thnaQ Raaj thanQ soo much
luv
Peiyush
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hi deboo, thanQ boss
regards
Peiyush
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bhai….should hav mentioned..”liberty footwear ” na….dont tell me it dint inspire u huh??…it ws their tagline….
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o ya????? haha!!!!
good one
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Hi friend,
How are you doin?
Nice to know that we share the same vibes..You won’t believe …Me and my frien’ (yogesh) have also rope in few lines in ” tum samay ki raet par”…and too my surprise… our lil’ community of friend’s liked it also ….its a great composition.
I have also recorded it.
Regards
vibhor.
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really soothing composition !!!!!
great work !
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vivek arora-sir ……….hmmmmmm..wat a sonf…feel hi feel……….thodi si feel yahan bhi dedo plz…hmm…u rock..\M/
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vivek arora-sir ……….hmmmmmm..wat a sonG…feel hi feel……….thodi si feel yahan bhi dedo plz…hmm…u rock..\M/
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