Missing You
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About the Song: This song is about a boy whose lover/friend gone abroad for studies for some time and he is missing her a lot and singing this song. hey don’t try to guess that boy isn’t me. (made it for some body else).
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Lyrics By: Peiyush Sharma
Composed by: Peiyush Sharma
Vocals By: Peiyush Sharma
Arranging/Mixing Mastaring and Recording by: Peiyush Sharma
Lyrics:
Missing You
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Usska wo chehra
Wo gorey gaal
Maasoom adaein usski
Wo lammbe baal
Usski wo bholi baatein
Chan-chal aada
Tan ki khushboo wo usski
Phoolon ki tarha
Saari duniya dekhe buss mein he na dehkhoon
Saari duniya dekhe buss mein he na dehkhoon
Gussa karna wo usska
Choti choti baton pe rona
Cherdna mazaak karna
Aur khoob hansna
Chere pe baalon ka girna
Petu bann ke khoob khaana
Aur tabiyat bigad jaane pe
Kehna kych karo…
Saari duniya dekhe buss mein he na dehkhoon
Saari duniya dekhe buss mein he na dehkhoon……
Missing You…..
1)Beautiful song
2)maintained the feel of the song till th end
3)perfect selection of instruments
4)your voice is just awesome.
5)giving such good output in fruity loops is not a joke
6)very good EQ and mixed
But I think sould have reduced the delay time in the vocals coz the last words were getting bit over delayed.
overall its just an awesome song…
gr8 work bro..
keep making such awesome music
all the best
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hey!!!! Kamran,
ThanQ so much yaar, for giving me such a useful and important advise and support.u r truly a gr8 musician so down to earth and supportive.
Thanx once again bro and keep supporting me.
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Peiysh,
I am in a mood to comment on the song, really. When I was playing it, I was just thinking, how we, artists of tempostand have progressed, improved….(It is a cool song, just forget it. It is yet another song)
I believe Kamran, and Dr.Madusuthan and other friends too would agree.
Thanks tempostand, on behalf of my fellow artists.
Thanks
Gokul
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
June 19th, 2009 at 11:39 PM
Thank yo Gocoool(gokul), i always wait comments and suggestions form u. thanx bro for liking my work again. these comments are very important for me they are like energy boosters for me.
thanx again bro
love
Peiyush
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Kamran Reply:
June 20th, 2009 at 12:52 AM
I agree with you anna and yes thanks to tempostand, on behalf of fellow artists
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hi bro!!! i fully agree with gokul and kamran!! coooool song…you have managed to do apt treatment( beautiful!!) with the theme of the song..your voice has a distinct texture and you have always managed to come out with songs that sound perfect in your voice…overall another beautiful song from you….i agree with kamran..just the vocals sound a bit embedded in the last words..but barring that..its a great effort!! …..
keep more of such music flowing….
for the love of music…
all the best!!
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
June 19th, 2009 at 11:47 PM
thanx bro thanQ so much,
yes i knw i left that but i wanted that “missing u” line that way only. actually this work is only whole night work only form 12:50am to 7am morning. during this time i made lyrics, composed, made track, recorded and mixed it in the same time. so that happened, well next time I’ll sure remove these errors, i knw i need to learn a lot and i am ready too. please help me to improve cuz i really want to improve cuz i don’t want to stay here i want to grow please feel free to say anything.
Thanx again for your support and comments bro
Love
Peiyush
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Gokul Reply:
June 20th, 2009 at 12:10 AM
Hey Peiysh,
Cool. That happens. Just because, you stress. Stress is a match stick you can light a candle or do burn home.
OK. Let us try and let this be here on this forum.
In my opinion,
If you are looking for a break-through, you are suppose to stress and stress is not which bothers an artist,but the way he or she handles that.
You said you did work from 12:50 to 07:00 AM
It is obvious that we do something poorly at this time. OK it depends. Over all the song is good you why? just because of your involvement.
I could work it leisurely. What we often forget is not producing more music. That really help us to grow. But when it comes for presentation, or hosting your song in a web, then, you have to make better among your best compositions.
I suggest you not push yourself much. And don’t think you have finish a song at a stretch, let it go on its own flow.
First let me know am I addressing right issues, then may be we will discuss.
Regards,
Gokul
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
June 20th, 2009 at 12:20 AM
haha……… u r right bro…..
ok so i can work again on this song.
Awesome peace of art buddy. Who ever the boy was , must’ve surely impressed the girl with this
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
June 19th, 2009 at 11:48 PM
thanQ rahul, yes that happnd boy got his girl back.
Love
Peiyush
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It is a tough job to comment or judge a song from any budding composer. Hence i try to be as straight forward as possible.I will soon be writing an article over this in my blog.But, anyways good song man, u have improved a lot from ur earlier compositions,
For me
Vocals: ok, meaning suits only for this kind, GRT for this song.
Mixing/Mastering: Excellent. If u did this in fruity loops then Take a Bow my man.
Lyrics: Very bad, words are not fitting into the tune.Same problem with ur earlier compostions also, please give this job to someone else.
Good Luck.
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
June 19th, 2009 at 11:55 PM
thanQ bro,
ya actually i am looking for a good lyricist but i am not getting any please y don’t u help me. and when i was making this song that guy asked me to make lyrics this way only so as my client said i’ve done accordingly.
i am so sorry dear for lyrics hope u’ll help me to improve or help me to find someone who can wrights good lyrics.
yes i’ve done whole thing only on “Frooty Loops” even vocals.
please help me to improve more and more and more….
thanx a ton for ur comments bro, u can even mail me any time for my betterment at:
peiyushsharma@gmail.com
love
Peiyush
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i was waiting for this thanx peiyush.for me u r always superb n i m not agree with point blank words r not very bad?????????! try to understand the woards!!! each n every woard true n nothing is bad in it !!!!!!!!!
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
June 19th, 2009 at 11:57 PM
thanQ sadhna for ur lovely comments and support and for liking my song and lyrics too.
love
Peiyush
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n feeling of this song simply superb dear.second time wen u sang “saari dunia dekhe per me hi na dekhu” it showing the pain of ur soul!!!!!!!!!
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
June 19th, 2009 at 11:57 PM
thanx dear thanx again
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once again its simply awesome
all the best
and keep making such kinda songs, loving it…
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
June 20th, 2009 at 12:58 AM
so sweet of u kamran u r so kind
love
Peiyush
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Softness and touching everybody’s soul is your speciality. As music composition is concerned you are good. I am sure you are improving each day b’coz you do not have set back attitude.Once again a good job. Keep it up dear….
Wish you all the LUCK!!!!
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
June 20th, 2009 at 11:09 PM
thanQ nandika i always need your support.
thanx buddy
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Hey Piyush,
Quite impressive work with composition. you have really worked hard to come up to this standard dear.
You have already got a lot of comments, advice and suggestions still I will like to add some suggestions.
1. Lyrics needs improvement, same feelings can be expressed in a different way and in different words so that it sounds more poetic, mild and sweet.
2. Rhythm and flow at few points seems monotonous, some variation to break monotony and engage the audience will make it great.
My best wishes are with you always. You have the potential my dear.
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
June 20th, 2009 at 11:11 PM
thanQ Ratikant ji, i’ll keep these things in my mind nex whn i make new.
thanx a lot again for giving your time
love
Peiyush
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Song is really very beautiful.The words “SARI DUNIYA DEKHE USE MAI HI NA DEKHOO”r very nice and different.KEEP ROKING.
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
June 30th, 2009 at 3:25 PM
hey! thanx rohini, ur voice is also very good.
love
Peiyush
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Dear Peiyush,
i am in love with your song, lyrics, tune and your special deep sweet voice.
i am going through this condition so i can feel it more then any body, i cried many time with this song. this song touched my heart.
my special thanks and blessings to you Peiyush the maestro magician of the music world.
keep making this sweetness which is missing now days.
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
June 30th, 2009 at 3:28 PM
ThanQ Mr. Manoj i can understand your feeling, cuz the guy i made this song was feeling the same. hope ur dear will soon come back.
Love
Peiyush
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i can’t express it Peiyush but you are a great musician you said the same thing which i am feeling these days.
Thank you so much for this song.
can i download it? (Please….)
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
June 30th, 2009 at 3:29 PM
Thanx again Mr Manoj,ya sure u can download my songs, log on to my website and download my songs.
or mail me at peiyushsharma@in.com
Love
Peiyush
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this song is “AWESOME” dude
keep rocking
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
July 2nd, 2009 at 2:47 PM
Thanx Harsh.
Love
Peiyush
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i like this line “saari dunia dekhe bus me he na dekhu”
n u r voice touchd my heart again cuz itz nt like sonu nigam or othr singr itz diffrnt, smooth n original(diffrnt lyk rahman)
keep it up
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
July 2nd, 2009 at 2:48 PM
Thanx Varsha but Rahman is Rehman the legend i am nothing infront of him.
thanx Again
love
Peiyush
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hi peiyush good work with lots of improvements like recording and mixing quality. have to say this that you are a good composer. going right way.
keep rocking peiyush
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
July 2nd, 2009 at 2:49 PM
thank you ravi for ur very supportive comments
Love
Peiyush
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good work peiyush
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ya 1more thing chk my blog for my new entry.
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
July 2nd, 2009 at 2:50 PM
thanx Raghu, ya sure i’ll check your work too
Love
Peiyush
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Hi Bro !!! Very good.. Ur voice texture is really superb bro. Pleasent song. Arrangement wise I thought u would have used some othr instrumental lead ( Start n end )otherwise the song is cool
Good effort. Keep Making good music.
Regards
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
July 2nd, 2009 at 2:52 PM
thanx Siddharth ya sure i’ll improve and add some more in this song(Soon) i am working on a new song n for tht i need a female voice. so i’ll be in touch with you.
Love
Peiyush
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Good Work, Like it…
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
July 4th, 2009 at 10:54 PM
Thank you Deepak
Love
Peiyush
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bhai dil cheer liya is gaane ne to, chha gaya bhai
lage raho mere munna bhai
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
July 9th, 2009 at 11:13 PM
ThnaQ Narresh Bhai
Love
Peiyush
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great yaar, sahi chal raha hi tu. keep rocking
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
July 9th, 2009 at 11:13 PM
Hey Dheeru, Thanx Bro.
Love
Peiyush
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hi …. bohoth acha gaana hai yaar … vocals ne iss gaane mein jaan daal di hai … keep it up bro … take care god bless u …. the feel of the song is very nice ….
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
July 11th, 2009 at 8:18 PM
hey Thank u so much bro.thanx for supporting me actually i need it.
love
Peiyush
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vasu Reply:
July 12th, 2009 at 8:01 PM
have u gone through the songs of NWDS conducted by tempostand… iam one of the participant of that competition … Iam from gitam college … samy is my frnd … we both composed a song which went for finals …song name is Sneha bandham”…iam the singer of the song … ek singer hi singer ki quality pehchantha hai bhai… u did a grt job in vocals take care bye
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
July 13th, 2009 at 3:43 PM
i am so sorry those days i was very busy, but now i’ll chk.
thanx again bro.
touched my heart, love the line “sari duniya dekhe”
keep it up bhai
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
July 13th, 2009 at 3:44 PM
thanx buddy even i like those most.
love
Peiyush
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hello sir, u rock sir, u r a real rock star…
u rox
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Peiyush Sharma Reply:
July 16th, 2009 at 6:05 PM
hey mona, thank you soooooooooo much.
Love
Peiyush
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kya lajawaab karya kiya hai huzoor aapney,
prashansa ke yogyye karye kiya hai, aapki lagan aur mehnat iss mein saaf jhalakti hai,
ab bhai kabhi hamari kisi kavita ko bhi ye ye avsar pradaan karein ki wo bhi pannkh laga ke oonchaiyon mein uoord paaye.
ummeed hai aap isi prakaar aagey bhi apney sangeet mein madhurta ka russ banaye rakheinngey
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thanx mahi.
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