A Train Of Thoughts
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About the Song: A song trying to capture to mood of a journey in an Indian Sleeper. 
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Lyrics:
Manzilain (Manzilain) Door hain (Door hain)
Raste mein kho gaye
Dooriyaan (Dooriyaan) Faasle (Faasle)
Shabd hain aur geet hain
Chorus
Doob jaane do humein bhi
Paas aane do humein bhi
Hum bhi chho ke to dekhein hasaratien
Assman se karke chaahat
humnein ki thi jo bagawat
aasman ke hi bandi ho chale
Kagazon (kaagazon) Mein bandh li(bandh li)
Bas kahani meri teri
Aksharoon (Aksharoon) se bhar gaye
saare aanso aur sab hansi
Chorus
Ab batane to raha kya
Aur sunane ko bacha kya
apni saanse bhi teri ho chali
Assman se karke chaahat
humnein ki thi jo bagawat
aasman ke hi bandi ho chale
hey,
great
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hey,
great song.
good to hear u again
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Thnks boss
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lol, u got to be kidding me…….
10 more years and u will be able to write …….
bagawat?..bhai be a little matured in ur writing…..
Manzilain (Manzilain) Door hain (Door hain)
Raste mein kho gaye
Dooriyaan (Dooriyaan) Faasle (Faasle)
Shabd hain aur geet hain
ye kya paragraph hai…..do u even know what u are writing……??????
lyrics are all about what u feel….u cant end up writing something for the sake of writing it……and instead of abusivley responsding to this comment…..make ur pseudo talent a real one….
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Hmm… Well by bagawat I meant the concept of an overachiever. As for
Manzilain (Manzilain) Door hain (Door hain)
Raste mein kho gaye
Dooriyaan (Dooriyaan) Faasle (Faasle)
Shabd hain aur geet hain
when ur on a long journey… u tend to lose track of time and space and for those moments u enjoy the train as if that itself was the destination. Anyways if you do not like the song… it is perfectly understandable
… I am not claiming to be a god lyricist.
But I would prefer that you kindly do not post on my songs. I know a lot of people who like this song and trust me I am not missing u presence amongst the them.
Cheers!!!
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i havent heard the song yet
, lyrics dekhke sunne ka hi man nahi hua………..
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hahhahhahahhahhahahhahha, lollll, i heard the song………. i cant stop laughing to it……….
how old are u man?
dude take ur time and compose…..dont end up putting every second tune that stikes ur mind into words… and secondly, tune ur guitar when u record….
There are two ways of taking this comment..
1. taking this comment on ur ego and thinking that ur song is actually good. or
2. taking this comment on a possitive side… and work on ur skills and abilities….
its upto u……
cheers…..
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Hmm… I really dont have much to say to that apart from “If you dont like it dont listen to it.”
Vaibhav
P.S. I will work on my skills… maybe you should work on you grammer
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i dont make grammatical errors…. agar hai to batao…i will get to learn…. morever the above comment was not limited to a particular “tense” . it was related to ur brain that contains non “sense”.
Peace out,
Jamidak
P.S. and u should have paid attention in ur grammer classes a little more than i did since it seems hard for u to recognize and analyize gramatically correnct inglis sentes…{by the way pun intended….duh!!} and ya man one more thing trying reading the figure of speech chapter in wren and martin to improve ur writing ablities…. or for improving ur writing ablilities… (two options for ur incoherent brain to recognize and analyize)
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ya one thing
the grammatical errors have been delibrately made in the P.S. part of the above comment so please….compose and write rather than blabbering ur ass off over here…
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am sorry for hurting ur music….but thats just an indirect encouragement to compose “better”.
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Dont make this another ORKUT community fight!
Good job bro
u dnt have to explain anything to anyone!
wat the fuck is wrong with people??!!
anyways,keep it up!
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Thanks boss
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and for god’s sake…. its not Grammer , it is Grammar .
regards.
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lol… true.
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